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Friday, July 5, 2013

Goldilocks and the three pigs

Once upon a time in a land far far away there lived a little girl named Goldilocks. She was a slave to her evil step mum. One day she was so sad that she ran away from home. She was so hungry that the trees looked like food.

As she was running she came upon a house made out of  candy. She stopped at the door and knocked. Out came a sweet old lady and said " come inside my child  you look hungry. Here, eat anything you want" “No” Goldilocks said I must be going now. “Why so soon?”  said the lady. Thanks but I have to go now, then the sweet old lady brag out her wand a flick it at the door the door shut “ahh ha ha ha i’m a witch” goldilocks ate half of the door and ran.   

Her heart was beating 24'7 As The witch was right behind her then. She saw another house she jumped through the door and looked around and hoped that no one was home, then she got up and walked around. As she was walking she saw bowls of soup.  A big bowl,A medium bowl, and a small bowl. first she tried the big bowl ahh too hot then she tried the  medium bowl yuck too cold  then she tried the last which was the small bowl delicious, thats perfect. Then she was so tired and went up stairs and saw 3 bed’s. She tried The first one ,But it was too hard, then the Second one, but it was too Soft, Lastly the Third one Just perfect she   said.

They decided to look around some more and when they got upstairs to the bedroom, Papa Pig growled, "Someone's been sleeping in my bed," "Someone's been sleeping in my bed, too" said the Mama Pig "Someone's been sleeping in my bed and she's still there!" Baby Pig.  Just then, Goldilocks woke up and saw the three bears.  She screamed, "Help!"  And she jumped up and ran out of the room.  Goldilocks ran down the stairs, opened the door, and ran away into the forest.  And she never returned to the home of the three Pig.




   








1 comment:

  1. Hello Isiaht,
    I enjoyed reading your fairytale. The twists that you added made it interesting and a pleasure to read. A small reminder, remember to read over what you write just to make sure it says what you mean it to say. Keep up the fantastic work.

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